Vote For The Best Introduction

Here are two different introductions. In Room 17 I was learning how to hook my audience. My first introduction starts off with action to hook my audience. My second introduction is about my thought and feelings. Please vote for the best introduction by commenting on my post.

“I found one!” my brother shouted. He found a caramel Easter egg hiding under my bed. With great difficulty I tried my hardest to find a delicious Easter egg. Then all of a sudden I saw a picnic bar. I tried to walk over there with out any noise, but my cousin saw me, and ran and got it. I thought to myself that this is not as easy as I thought it was. When it was all finished I only had 2 Easter eggs in my giant bag.Luckily my brother Jordan wanted to share his Easter eggs with me.

How could finding Easter eggs be hard? I mean you just have to go looking all over the house for them, I thought to myself. So when we started looking for yummy treasures with my family, I could not find anything. I was really surprised and also disappointed. I then realized that I was the worst person in my family to look for little chocolate eggs.