Friday, June 17, 2011
Information about a little movie called Partly Cloudy
Partly Cloudy
In our class room 17 we did a movie review about partly cloudy.
The characters in partly cloudy are the storks and the Clouds.
This movie is set in the blue sky.
It stars off with storks delivering Babies, Puppies and Kittens to people.
The main problem is that one stork doesn't really like what Mr cloud makes for him to deliver. Sadly the stork goes to another cloud and Mr cloud thinks that he left him, but the stork wanted to find some armor for himself.
This movie ends off happily as the stork comes back to his cloud and they start to work together again.
I would rate this movie 10/10 because it is really funny and it ends off with a happy ending.
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It was a cute movie wasn't it! Do you think you could go back into this text to:
ReplyDelete1. Put in an introduction sentences so we know what you are writing about.
2. Split the paragraphs up into - the beginning, the main action, - the conclusion