Vivienne-Our Courtyard Needs A Makeover

Rubric marked by my classmate Kingston.

Our courtyard between room 17 and the hall, needs a makeover. There are many reasons for this. One reason is that fights happen a lot due to crowded conditions in the rest of the playground, and when the fields are close we need more space to play in. This area is also very ugly.

Fights: it is very frightening sometimes when kids get into fights just because it is crowded. There are crowded conditions in the breeze and in the playground area that sometimes starts fights. If we had a makeover than less fights would happen in our school.

When the fields are close we need more space to play in. My partner, Rita and I have, surveyed, researched, talked, emailed and also foundries people to see what they would like in our courtyard. We know what kids want in our courtyard and what we should replace it with or even improve on.

Our courtyard is very hideous, and I have proof. If you have been to our courtyard than you would have seen that there is a big dutch in our grass area. The walls have mud on it because off some little kids. They put there grubby hands on the walls which make them really revolting. There is a drain right in the middle were grass comes out off it. We could definitely entice children to come but because off this, they will not come. If we had a makeover than kids would come.

These where all my reasons for having a makeover and I think our courtyard should have a makeover. Don’t you think?