Here is a movie that Litia, Brooklyn, Tyla, Shoal, Chante and myself made. My part in this movie is at the beginning when you eat your food. When you eat your food your salver helps it to brake it down.
I would gave my voice over a rating of 8 out of 10 because it was very clear. I would gave a rating for the whole movie a 9 out of 10. We finished in time and we worked to together as a team.
Parts that I think we need to improve on are editing it properly and focusing on our work not our team works. But I have to say that somethings I did like about our movie is that we used Shrek as our main character and we were not shy to do our sound effects.Hopefully this will tell or even teach you about your digestive system. Sit back and relax.
Hi Vivienne,
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing! That challenge was fun and I feel really sorry for the people in Africa. I also liked the challenge when we had to invent a device that helps to clean water. I think you should double check your work because the movie isn't on, and if it is I can't see it. Anyway Keep Up The Great Work!
Shoal