Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Show Not Tell

We had a writing activity. My class had to write about a girl that was upset, but we weren't allowed to use the word sad or anything that related to it. Once again me and Ashleigh wrote this together.

Slowly her smile turned upside down which then became a frown. From there, water coming from her eyes travelled down from her face to her hands. She wiped her face again.

1 comment:

  1. very creative :) well done sweeti

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