Friday, July 20, 2012

Precious McKenzie The Weight Lifter

With veins bulging as he balances the weight upon his chest, Precious the weight lifter had determination written all over his face.  He was prepared. With a huge heave, he lifted the enormous bar over his head for all to see. This was a great achievement.

By Vivienne and Ashleigh and Chante


  1. Hi Vivienne,
    This post is very complicated, and very interesting to read. My favourite bit was when his eyes were bulging and veins were pulsing. It was very sophisticated. Keep up the great work Vivienne.
    Yours Sincerely, Makerita

  2. Hi Vivienne,

    This is a very complex paragraph all of your group have put a lot of thought and ideas to make this paragraph very effective. Anyway keep up the good work.

    From Darius


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