Wednesday, July 4, 2012

A True Friend

As Litia turned back to see me, her brown hair flicked across her face. “Owwww” She said to me. It was easy for everyone to hurt her, not like they would though. I asked if she was o.k and she said yes with a big smile.

Litia was always cheerful. Her smile would brighten up my day and even my friends as well. But when it came to netball that happy face was washed away with an attitude, and because she was vice captain, she knew most of us were counting on her to defend the shooters. As I said off court was a different world with Litia but she was still the same talented girl everyone knows.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Vivienne,
    I like how you put interesting vocabulary into your story.I also like how you put wonderful sentence beginning in your "A True Friend" story.
    Anyway I look forward to seeing more fantastic and interesting posts.



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