This is a record of my learning during my years at Pt England School.
Hey Vivienne, What a great paragraph. Even if the image of the rain was not there, I would've been able to tell easily that it was raining. Great way of explaining. Anyways keep up the great work. Yours Sincerely, Mubba
Hello Vivienne, that was a very good explanation about it being a rainy day. You are a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing your work.Keep up the great work, Chante
Hey Vivienne What a great paragraph. Even if the photo of the rain pouring wasn't there, I could still imagine what your writing was about. Your a very great writer. Keep up the great work!
Hey vivenneYou have lots of interesting word in your story which makes it cool.By jordan
Hi Jordan,Thanks for commenting on my blog. You are sharing the love. Can't wait to see your blog! Vivienne
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